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There’s nothing like a first impression, and that’s especially true for novels. The first few pages of a book need to do the impossible: ground the reader without becoming expositional vomit, hook them while keeping the focus tight, implant them into the action, and somehow establish a voice and a tone. It’s an absurd undertaking if you stop to think about it, which is why for every “it was the best of times, it was the worst of times” out there, there are hundreds of “just couldn’t get into it” openers.
But there are those that somehow pull off the impossible. Maybe it’s the way they frame an innocent happening in a way that has you questioning your senses, or embed you inside the mind of someone who’d feel at home inside a padded cell. Of course, that’s only the beginning. Because lesser thrillers go pedal to the metal from the beginning, only to run out of gas in the middle and find themselves sputtering to the finish line. The best thrillers know when to shift gears, to take their foot off the gas and ease into the twists and turns ahead, and just when to take it back into a higher gear.
‘The Ax’ (1997)
The Ax kicks off with an anti-confession: Burke Devore has never killed anyone. There’s his father, who may know a thing or two from serving in World War II, but his father’s dead. He had an old Luger, which could come in handy, but Burke has never even fired a gun. Again, he’s coming up a bit short. So just a few pages in, and the reader comes face-to-face with a possible murder. But there are lingering questions, like who he wants dead and what could’ve driven this ordinary middle-aged man to this point.
It’s this mixture that makes Donald E. Westlake’s opening pages so masterful. It’s that blasé self-critique, akin to an unqualified job applicant ticking off the weaknesses in his resume, mixed with so many unanswered questions that propels the reader into the story. And the explanation for how Burke landed here — losing his job as a manager at a paper company and months of unsuccessful applications — keeps building upon that. Westlake turns murder into just another unpleasant business decision. It’s a satire of corporate America that somehow manages to make us laugh at a man planning multiple murders.
‘Blacktop Wasteland’ (2020)
S. A. Cosby starts pressing the gas from the jump in Blacktop Wasteland. Literally. He places the reader at the starting line of a race; a cocky driver revving his Oldsmobile as Beauregard Montage, known as Bug, stares him down. Bug hears something no one else does: a faulty valve, and bets on himself, to the tune of $1,000. The fact that his auto-repair shop is $800 behind on rent, and his youngest child needs glasses, be damned.
Cosby shows us just a glimpse of his cards, but it’s enough to keep us at the table. We get the two competing sides of Bug that will continue to wrestle one another throughout the succeeding pages: his unmatched ability behind the wheel and his less-than-stellar judgment outside the car. Cosby keeps raising the stakes from there, injecting such exhilaration into the pages with each getaway that it’s impossible not to root for Bug to pull it off, though the dread you feel hoping he might come to his senses grows heavier and heavier.
‘Brighton Rock’ (1938)
There’s a sinister dichotomy in the opening pages of Brighton Rock: Charles Hale is desperately trying to evade killers, zigzagging amongst the crowds of Brighton’s holiday market. Graham Greene leaves the biggest question — what Charles has done to end up in this situation — rattling around the reader’s mind. It’s dark and twisted, thrilling and contemplative. Here’s a man facing almost certain death in a seaside resort full of people having the time of their lives.
Greene uses that contrast as a throughline to turn a seaside crime story into one of the more meditative thrillers ever written. It centers on Pinkie Brown, a teenage gangster and devout Catholic who believes in eternal damnation with every fiber of his being, making his willingness to kill all the more baffling. Then there’s Ida Arnold, a considerably less religious woman more concerned with enjoying life and treating people decently. When the two become intertwined in the aftermath of Hale’s murder, Greene rides their contradictory beliefs to explore sin and redemption.
‘The Day of the Jackal’ (1971)
Frederick Forsyth kicks off The Day of the Jackal with an execution. Jean-Marie Bastien-Thiry has been sentenced to death for helping plot the assassination of French President Charles de Gaulle, and Forsyth is going to make us watch. He takes us through the whole grim business with the eye of a crime reporter, right down to the traffic passing outside the prison walls. Then, with Bastien-Thiry dispatched, Forsyth turns back the clock to reconstruct the assassination attempt itself.
Forsyth almost coddles the reader to a degree in which they have no other option but to accept the extraordinary things Forsyth has planned. He establishes a factual foundation, pulling selections from the historical record while slipping his fictional assassin into the mix in a way that makes it hard to tell fact from fiction. And the intricate details don’t end there, as the ensuing manhunt is a literal paper trail of forged passports and surveillance reports.
‘Flowers Over the Inferno’ (2018)
Ilaria Tuti turns a room full of babies into a terrifying scene in Flowers Over the Inferno. Forty infants lie in numbered cots inside an Austrian orphanage, and not one of them cries. The caretakers conceal their faces behind veils, forbidden from showing the children any affection. Number 39 glares at a caretaker named Agnes, watching her movements with an attentiveness that seems unnatural for an infant. When she reaches over with a finger extended, he bites it, and the other babies begin stirring.
Tuti then takes the reader far from that orphanage, both in space and time. As that troubling scene festers in the reader’s mind, we’re introduced to police superintendent Teresa Battaglia, who, decades later in the Italian Alps, is investigating a series of grisly crimes while her memory slowly deteriorates. As the two stories converge, Tuti gives us increasingly disturbing glimpses into the experiments conducted at the orphanage, and the less straightforward the distinction between victim and perpetrator becomes.
‘The Good Son’ (2016)
You’d think finding your mother with her throat slit would provoke some pretty extreme emotions. You-Jeong Jeong makes the opening of The Good Son uncomfortable by giving us the opposite. Yu-jin wakes to the smell of blood, discovers his mother’s body downstairs, and can barely remember the previous night. There’s also blood on his clothes. Yet he seems more concerned with explaining his predicament than grieving his mother. It’s a hell of a way to introduce a narrator.
Jeong places the reader in the hands — and mind — of this deeply suspicious man to find out what happened. Yu-jin starts piecing together the previous night, offering explanations that seem reasonable enough until the evidence begins contradicting them. But he has a knack for justifying his behavior, and Jeong makes it easy to accept his excuses. Soon, we’re questioning not only if Yu-jin killed his mother, but if he’s capable of admitting it to himself. It’s a bit of manipulation on the part of Jeong, who makes the reader distrust practically everything they read.
‘The River’ (2019)
The River starts simply enough: with the smell of smoke. Jack and Wynn catch a whiff while canoeing through the Canadian wilderness. Then they catch another, and another. There are no campsites, no other travelers in sight. When they climb to an overlook, they can see a wildfire ripping its way through the forest, heading right for them. Peter Heller flips the script: he’d spent most of the opening writing the wilderness as paradise, only to turn it into a death trap in which every gust of wind matters.
It seems troubling enough, a predicament most writers would spend another hundred-plus pages wringing out the tension. But Heller pours more fuel onto the story. Jack and Wynn overhear a couple arguing and decide to investigate what’s happening. All they get for their trouble is a situation that’s far more difficult to navigate than the river ahead. The River isn’t just a thriller for thriller’s sake; instead, it explores the fragility of male friendship and the horrors of human nature, stripping away any romantic notion of the back-to-nature fantasy.
‘The Spy Who Came in From the Cold’ (1963)
John le Carré sharpened the opening of The Spy Who Came in From the Cold into a sinister edge that cuts through the heart of the reader. An agent doesn’t just get gunned down while trying to escape East Berlin; the intelligence officer waiting for him on the other side is praying he’s dead. And, even worse, he’s the one responsible for keeping the agent alive.
Alec Leamas, the intelligence officer, does have his reasons. A wounded agent can be interrogated, but a dead one takes his secrets with him. It’s a horrible calculation, but you understand it, and that’s how le Carré gets you. Leamas is sent on one final assignment to bring down an East German intelligence chief, and the further he gets, the harder it becomes to tell who’s deceiving whom. But it’s the moral math that makes this thriller novel so devastating, and the real tragedy is watching Leamas discover just how little his years of loyal service have bought him.
‘Three to Kill’ (1976)
Most thrillers would save the revelation that a character has killed two men for a big moment. Jean-Patrick Manchette drops it into the opening of Three to Kill almost as an aside. Georges Gerfaut is speeding around Paris at 90 mph, having downed five bourbons and a couple of barbiturates. But the narrator is more interested in his Mercedes, his taste in West Coast jazz, and his political leanings than the fact that he’s murdered two people in the past year.
And the explanation, when it comes, is almost as absurd. Georges stops to help an injured motorist and, for his trouble, winds up being hunted by professional killers. Manchette turns the bloodshed that follows into a joke about French middle-class complacency, describing extreme violence with the same indifference he gives to Georges’s car upholstery. Georges is oddly skilled at doling out the type of brutality from which he’s spent his life sheltered. It all becomes an indictment of bourgeois respectability, delivered with such deadpan humor that you occasionally forget the appalling nature of what’s happening.
‘The Talented Mr. Ripley’ (1955)
Patricia Highsmith opens The Talented Mr. Ripley with Tom Ripley convinced he’s being followed by the police. He’s been running a few scams around New York, so he’s got reason to worry. The stranger turns out to be Herbert Greenleaf, a wealthy businessman who wants Tom to travel to Italy and persuade his son Dickie to come home. Within a few pages, Highsmith has introduced a man who’s terrified of being found out, then handed him an opportunity to become someone else entirely.
And that’s exactly where she takes him. Tom becomes obsessed with Dickie’s privileged life, and his envy gradually gives way to something far more dangerous. Highsmith lets us follow every calculation Tom makes, including the excuses he invents to justify his increasingly atrocious behavior. Before long, we’re making excuses for Tom right along with him. We know what he’s doing is wrong, yet we find ourselves hoping he won’t get caught. And with every lie he tells, Highsmith gives us another reason to fear that he will.
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